Friday, August 29, 2014

Friday, August 29 - Sub

There once was a submarine full of people like you and like me.
Diving deep down into a rough and raging sea.
When they resurfaced the ship their gauges went out
They were no longer on Earth without shadow of a doubt
Two moons in the sky and constellations unknown
There was no way for them to find their way home


And everybody died.


The End.

1 comment:

  1. With the most surprising and devastating twist ending, "Friday, August 29 - Sub" on Weekday's @ 10 makes a new spin on the beloved fair tale "Transformers: Dark of the moon" and does it quite well. The story is very meticulous with it's details, showing great attention the very last and unimportant thing. A secret message was given by the author. "TDWTTT" was givens. This is clearly a nod to the social justice group "Tomato's don't work tonight totally tubular", a tomato based surfer social group. The only flaw that can be found here is the supreme amount of lack of flipsto give about anything about their characters.

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